Tuesday, May 10, 2016


Hello Everybody! I was thinking a lot about how I find this way of commenting. I came to a deduction. People write comments every day, but as we disgus in class "not the right way". And it may be true. But when we get into wattpad, twitter, and other websites the comments are not written like that. More like: How beautiful you look here! Or: Thanks!  And stuff like that. So technicaly the greeting, value, and promise is missing. I think that when you make a comment about something, it means just say something shortly to someone. That is atleast what I thought until now. The steps I took to figure out how it "should be" were easy. Read the information and complete my task using what I learned while reading. It was easy, and that is how  felt: in ease. I say everybody writes comments (mostly the teens because of the social medias, in my opinion), and it comes in all form and sizes. For instance, I think my comment could have been much smaller, and contain the same amount of information. To summon everything up: In my opinion, comments can be made in 
different ways too.

(Some words are marked with colors, because they are important. The colors don't mean anything. They are just to it prettier instead of "negrita")





HERE IS OUR WORDCLOUD (MADE BY OLIVIA KRAUS, CAMILA MONCAYO, AND FELICITAS DE LA CRUZ)

We chose a map for our word cloud, because in the whole world people comment each day a great percent. So, hope you enjoy it!





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