Exercise Nr2
commenting some posts
How did it make me feel?
I feld good that I could write what I think about someone's post , becouse the evauation , even if it would be bad , will help him/her to make it better the next time. Its important for others to know what people think about they're posts, I didnt thought about that before. I learned much about how to make a good comment ,and im really happy , because I think it's really important to know how to make an well structured comment . Next time, I'm not just going to comment "Great post".
What steps did you take ?
First of all , I read the post and thought about how it made me feel. Some parts did made me laugh , and some parts made me think . Some even remembered me to something. Then I asked myself: What are the good things and what are the bad things in this post ? Remembering the good thinks , I first made a compliment , and then , I valued it so she could do better next time . There were also some great pictures and Videos , so I also commented about how much I enjoyed them.
My comment:
Hi Feli!
I really enjoyed this post and the videos!I think you are really funny and you are really good in english . The text really caught my attention .It was really interesting, I didn't knew you were born in new York!I also think we have much thinks in comun ;)
I absolutly loved the pictures. They are really good! specialy the first one , with your family. The videos were also pretty good and I loved the trailer of "me before you" It really touched me , and I want to watch the movie now! I already saw " The proposal"Its a really funny movie, and it has a very pretty end.
You are a movie lover just like me.
I admire you. I always wandet to play the chelo, I think it's a beautyfull instrument. I play the piano too, and I like to sing.
Your family names are really interesting. It kind of remembered me of
African names, and, I once read , the name of your brother means: the king of the light.
I really would like to know more about you!
You're such an interesting person.
I'm ready to google the meaning of felicitas now!
I'll be sharing with my friends :)
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