Exercise Nr2: Comment

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   Olivia Victoria KRAMay 1, 2016 at 3:04 PM

   Hi Sof,
   I really enjoyed reading your post. It is awesome!
   
   When I read it, I realized that both of us have lots of thing in common! For example I like to play Volleyball too and I agree with you, that the best thing to eat is the dough! I always eat the dough. I did not know that you also would like to do parachuting!It is amazing! My cousin has it done in Brazil two weeks ago. If you ever wanted to learn playing guitar, we could create a band because my dream is to learn drums! That might be a good idea.
   I thought that in your whole life you would like to have three or four cats, but no twenty! I feel so sorry that you are allergic to cats and you love them so much.
   When I saw the post of your favorite actor, Logan Lerman, I remembered that a few years ago we thought that his name was Logan Lauran. Oh! Things that we believed in old times, isn't it?
   The favorite song you mean above, is from Nelly. When you told me about this song I did not know who was the singer and how would it sound. At least I love it too!
   Maybe you could have put some photo of you, to make it look more attractive. Anyways I love your post!

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Exercise Nr.2

Personal reflection

Hello there, I like this exercise because there is interesting, very entertainig and helpfull for these persons that dont know how make a good comment. I also found a new page that it is very interresting. His name is WordClouds.com (here is the link http://www.wordclouds.com/) and it is a very cool page. Here you can make a very good project with words in a fotf. First you have to text some words, than you have to give them a form (in mine is a arrow of internet) and then you can change color of the backround and the words. You have make a Wordcloud! Also I have learn to make a better comment than "very interesant" and "I like it why...". I can make now very good comments and tath makes me very happy. I learn how is maked a comment and that was a little interesant. I hope we will make more exercises like this.

This is my personal reflection.

Pedro Pastorino

Exercise Nr2 by Astrid Corbacho

Personal reflection about commenting a classmates post

First I read all the information about commenting posts and about the structure that needed to have a comment. Then I picked up a publishment to comment it and I really liked Brittas, so I decided to write my opinion. At the beginning I asked my self how this post made me feel and if I had something similar to her or if something simmilar had happend to me before. After I answerd those questions I wrote my comment and I  value her post. I asked my self "Is it well written?", "Is the content intersting?" and I wrote those answers. I liked this exercise, because I think it is important to know how to express your point of view or your feeling about a publishment in a formal way. At the beginning I was a little confused, but after asking my self some questions and having some ideas in my mind what I was going to write I could create a comment with no problem. Now I can write better comments in a our google plus communities!

This is my word cloud:

Exercise 2:

  Exercise 2:

For me it is good that I can express my feelings in a comment , which at the same time helps another person to improve their quality when they are  writing a post . I think I've improved writing posts . It is a very good idea to invert time on making these kinds of comments that can help us a lot in the future.
I also encourage this a lot, to make First of all  ,                                                     I read the post , without losing concentration. After reading about 
twice , I decided to take a pooling , and review good things that 
interested me , and the things that I did not find very useful . I could 
help with the PNG sent by Professor Benassi, by Google Classroom. With
 no video, audio or photos , I couldhandle in an easier way , only commenting on the text.

  Exercise 2:

For me it is good that I can express my feelings in a comment , which at the same time helps another person to improve their quality when they are  writing a post . I think I've improved writing posts . It is a very good idea to invert time on making these kinds of comments that can help us a lot in the future.                        I also encourage this a lot, to make comments on the future.

Hi! this is my Wordcloud, hope you enjoy. :)

Exercise Nr2
 commenting some posts


How did it make me feel?

I feld  good that I could  write what I think about someone's post , becouse the evauation , even if it would be bad , will help him/her to make it better the next time. Its important for others to know what people think about they're posts, I didnt thought about that before. I learned much about how to make a good comment ,and im really happy , because I think it's really important to know how to make an well structured comment . Next time, I'm not just going to comment "Great post".

What steps did you take ?
First of all , I read the post and thought about how it  made me feel. Some parts did made me laugh , and some parts made me think . Some even remembered me to something. Then I asked myself: What are the good things and what are the bad things in this post ? Remembering the good thinks , I first made a compliment , and then , I valued it so she could do better next time . There were also some great pictures  and Videos , so I also commented about how much I enjoyed them.





My comment:
Hi Feli! 
I really enjoyed this post and the videos!I think you are really funny and you are really good in english . The text really caught my attention .It was really interesting, I didn't knew you were born in new York!I also think we have much thinks in comun ;) 

I absolutly loved the pictures. They are really good! specialy the first one , with your family. The videos were also pretty good and I loved the trailer of "me before you" It really touched me , and I want to watch the movie now! I already saw " The proposal"Its a really funny movie, and it has a very pretty end.
You are a movie lover just like me. 

I admire you. I always wandet to play the chelo, I think it's a beautyfull instrument. I play the piano too, and I like to sing.

Your family names are really interesting. It kind of remembered me of 
African names, and, I once read , the name of your brother means: the king of the light.

I really would like to know more about you!
You're such an interesting person.

I'm ready to google the meaning of felicitas now! 
I'll be sharing with my friends :)