First of all... HELLO GUYS! Here are my step of the point 5 of the Exercise Nr2.
It scrared me a little bit when Anselmo told us to write a good comment, because I did not knew and I did not understand how to do it . I wrote all along my life comments like : "Greate!", "Awsome" or "Keep doing like this. Lol", so I'm a disaster with this. Thant I raed the page "Making Conversation: How To Think Up Good Comments" that Anselmo sended and than I started writing. I really enjoyed writing comments. The first thing I wrote was something positive about the person who wrote the blog. Than I realized that I could discuss things in common with her, like music and hobbies. After that I told the writer some things that she could add to the blog to have it more complete. Than I wrote about some things I didn't knew about her and my opinion and something similar that happend to my mother too. At last the thing I wrote at the end was the happy end.
Sunday, May 1, 2016
Exercise Nr2: Personal Reflection
When Anselmo told us to write a comment, I was a little scared because everything I wrote in the comments was that I liked the picture or things like that and I could imagine that Anselmo did not want a comment like that. But then I read the page called " Making Conversation: How To Think Up Good Comments" and I came with some ideas.
First of all I searched for a comment where I could discuss things in common and where I could give my partner tips to improve. Then I started to read the post and became having thoughts. After that I started writing the comments. The first thing I wrote, was something nice. Then I started writing what we both have in common. After that, I realized that there was one thing that I did not know about my partner, so I commented it to her. There also was a thing that I remembered when we were younger. And at the end I gave her some tips to make her post more attractive.
I like this exercise because first of all I discovered things about another person, as well as I think that it helps you to put more attention on details when you see a photo or comment or whatever.
Personal Opinion Alexia Descovich
Hello evreybody!
Here I am going to tell you how I felt during writing the comments.
Okay, I am going to be honest, I'm not sure what was I feeling when I wrote the comment, because I can not give constructive critics for works. Actually I won´t give a critic, because the works from all of you was really good, in my opinion. The only reason why I wrote that comment in Sophie's, Sof's and Solly's post was a question of something that I did not understood. Why did they put the tiger first and at the end the elephant. I think it is for the size, but I do't know. I think that they can make the pictures bigger, than you can see the difference between each animal.
For the next time I would like not to have this exercise, because it is very hard for me, to comment my friends posts and I do not write good texts. I don't want to "hurt" their feelings with a critic. That is the reason why I can not give this comments.
Alexia
Here I am going to tell you how I felt during writing the comments.
Okay, I am going to be honest, I'm not sure what was I feeling when I wrote the comment, because I can not give constructive critics for works. Actually I won´t give a critic, because the works from all of you was really good, in my opinion. The only reason why I wrote that comment in Sophie's, Sof's and Solly's post was a question of something that I did not understood. Why did they put the tiger first and at the end the elephant. I think it is for the size, but I do't know. I think that they can make the pictures bigger, than you can see the difference between each animal.
For the next time I would like not to have this exercise, because it is very hard for me, to comment my friends posts and I do not write good texts. I don't want to "hurt" their feelings with a critic. That is the reason why I can not give this comments.
Alexia
Exercise Nr2
Exercise Nr2
Personal reflection about the process of commenting on a classmate's work: How did it make you feel? What steps did you take? Describe how you went about this task.
I'd made me feel good because I wrote positive things to the writer and it helped me reflect on my work too. I felt very important writing my opinion.
I took the steps that where in the link in Google Classroom from Anatomy of a good comment.
First of all I greeted the writers and I congratulated them about they're work. I told them that I loved their work. I told them that they had a very good idea. Then I told the writers compliments. Like, for example, the colours that they used were nice and that the information was the correct one. That the exercise was excellent for the first time. Another compliment was that the information was simple and that one could understand it. After that I told them my experience with my friends doing the exercise. Next came the value. And at
last I thanked them for publishing their works and I promised them that I would share the post to my friends.
166/160 words
Personal reflection about the process of commenting on a classmate's work: How did it make you feel? What steps did you take? Describe how you went about this task.
I'd made me feel good because I wrote positive things to the writer and it helped me reflect on my work too. I felt very important writing my opinion.
I took the steps that where in the link in Google Classroom from Anatomy of a good comment.
First of all I greeted the writers and I congratulated them about they're work. I told them that I loved their work. I told them that they had a very good idea. Then I told the writers compliments. Like, for example, the colours that they used were nice and that the information was the correct one. That the exercise was excellent for the first time. Another compliment was that the information was simple and that one could understand it. After that I told them my experience with my friends doing the exercise. Next came the value. And at
last I thanked them for publishing their works and I promised them that I would share the post to my friends.
166/160 words
Personal Reflection Exercise NR.2 (5)
PERSONAL REFLECTION:
Hi I´m Joaquín Arana and I'm going to talk about how I felt when we do the project. Ok let's go...
Well, first I was scared because I did not understood what I must to do. But then I ask to my mother and she told me what i must to do.
When I started I was nervous because I do not wanted to indicate the fail to my partner, but when I saw the anatomy and there was all very kindly, I understood how to wrote the comment.
I wrote a really large compliment and also a large value but not so long like the anatomy of a good comment. Then I don't now what fail must I to indicate to my partner but finally I found a fail and I wrote it very kindly, adversely my partner could be very angry.
I think that this is a very good project because I didn't now how to write a good comment but now I now it.
Hi I´m Joaquín Arana and I'm going to talk about how I felt when we do the project. Ok let's go...
Well, first I was scared because I did not understood what I must to do. But then I ask to my mother and she told me what i must to do.
When I started I was nervous because I do not wanted to indicate the fail to my partner, but when I saw the anatomy and there was all very kindly, I understood how to wrote the comment.
I wrote a really large compliment and also a large value but not so long like the anatomy of a good comment. Then I don't now what fail must I to indicate to my partner but finally I found a fail and I wrote it very kindly, adversely my partner could be very angry.
I think that this is a very good project because I didn't now how to write a good comment but now I now it.
Exercise Nr2: Word Cloud. Members Camila Moncayo, Felicitas De La Cruz and Olivia Kraus
Repost from Felicitas De La Cruz:
We chose a map as our figure in the word cloud, because people in different countries comment, and publish everyday, without knowing how they should do it.
We chose a map as our figure in the word cloud, because people in different countries comment, and publish everyday, without knowing how they should do it.
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